Eagle-Tribune poetry winners — adult category

By Rosemary Ford
Staff writer

May 07, 2008 01:24 am

We throw you for a loop this year.

For the last 25 years, The Eagle-Tribune's Spring Poetry Contest focused on tales of the season. Last year we opened up the contest to pieces related to all seasons, and had an overwhelming response.

For our 26th contest, we decided to shake things up a little more. We changed the topic completely, and asked local poets to send us their work about relationships.

Judging by the more than 300 entries we received in our youth and adult categories for the contest, now held in conjunction with Lawrence's Robert Frost Foundation, local writers like the idea too. Our judges at the Frost Foundation certainly did.

Foundation Executive Director Mark Schorr of Andover said the entries "were of the highest quality."

More than half our winners were first-time participants, including first-place winner Katy Abraham of Methuen.

"I read it every year, because I do like poetry," Abraham said. "I think how brave people are, that they can do that."

This year, Abraham was the brave one, and her poem about her grandchildren won her the top honor. Other poets turned to their parents, children, sweethearts and family members for inspiration.

First Place Winner

Katy Abraham

Age: 65

Hometown: Methuen

Occupation: Program manager at Elder Services of the Merrimack Valley

Entered the contest: First time

Inspired by: Time spent with her six grandsons. "I thought being a mom was great, but being a grandmother is fabulous."

'The Gift'

Let's race our bikes as fast as the wind,

Go slow on the hills and I'll let you win.

This is our day, together alone,

No rules, no work, our own time zone.

I'll pitch some balls, and not count strikes.

Or splash in some puddles if that's what you'd like.

Dessert before lunch, now that would be fun,

And giggles and laughs under the sun.

Let's close our eyes, and pretend to rest,

My child of my child, the best of my best.

We'll gaze at the clouds, and let our minds drift,

And let me say thank you for my birthday gift.

Second Place Winner

Matthew A. Kraunelis

Age: 30

Hometown: Methuen

Occupation: Chief of staff to the mayor

Entered the contest: Several times over the years

Inspired by: His father, who recently passed away. "We went fishing a lot. After he died, I would take his tackle box out, and I couldn't open it."

'Tackle Box'

Passed down from father to eager son,

a box of hooks and lures and line,

a box whose weathered wood enshrines

the light of mornings left undone.

Unopened since your last escape,

it holds the dreams of Aprils past,

and laughter that went by too fast,

as the breeze sketched ripples on the lake.

Now with my son, I draw the strength

and courage to continue on.

Your life, though it was short in length,

in loving, it was twice as long.

This box cannot return you to this place,

but lends your smile to your grandson's face.

Third Place Winner

Tim Cremin

Age: 50

Hometown: Andover

Occupation: Actuary

Entered the contest: Several times over the last 15 years; won in 2005.

Inspired by: The relationship between fathers and sons.

'Totaled'

"Totaled," was all he said, eyes on the wreck

as he circled it, change as always

jingling in his pocket. And he would know,

having worked his way up from adjuster

to whatever he is now. He wouldn't say more —

would rather I taunt myself with what he must

be thinking, having given me the car

a month ago — not a scratch in its six years,

and every scheduled maintenance done. And me

not knowing squat about insurance or cars,

and not caring to listen even if

he tried to tell me how long he saved up

his paper route money to buy his first car

because nobody ever gave him anything

he had to earn it all, so now do I feel

close enough to worthless?

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Honorable Mention

Bill Gleed

Age: 45

Hometown: Danville, N.H.

Occupation: Runs the Robert Frost Farm in Derry, N.H.

Entered the contest: First time (thanks to his mom)

Inspired by: Life near his former home in Fremont, N.H.

'Tree Swallows'

I.

Since last spring, tree swallows swoop and hang lefts

on black, wingtip dimes, elliptical. Pointed.

He follows where she goes.

They sat a-courting on my fence post.

II.

They eye the cedar nest-box.

She brings a bit of fluff from somewhere

He brings a found feather, a bit of string.

She brings a twig

He swoops the river and eats mosquitos.

In the morning I hear their song, or what I think is their song.

Him first, then her.

They build a circle of the things they find,

bits of other failures.

They do not mind.

Every day is still new, and every thing is still out there.

III.

There must have been eggs, because now there are chicks.

He races over the river in swoops

She alternates with him all day long in the warm sun.

Back to the nest box they bring the dragonflies

and stuff them down hungry gullets.

The dragonflies laid their eggs already anyway.

Honorable Mention

Alysia Alberti

Age: 18

Hometown: Lawrence

Occupation: Recent graduate

Entered the contest: First time

Inspired by: Her cousin David, a U.S. Marine stationed in Iraq.

'A Hero Within'

The nights get lonely

The days get cold

I feel as though I can't go on

I felt as though I wanted to die

But something keeps saying to me

"You can get through it you'll do fine"

But where the voice is coming from

I do not know then I hear

"You're just messed up don't get all worked up about it"

As the voice continues I start

To think do I have a hero

Within or am I crazy

But then I think and I know

The voice was yours

And you are a hero with in

To me and I always

Hope you will because you

Made the light shine for me

And I am no longer blind

And for that I thank you with

All my heart and soul

Next Week

Find out who won in our youth division.

Poets invited

You might have heard of a poetry slam.

The Robert Frost Foundation is quite kind — they prefer poetry hoots.

All are invited to their Super Hoot, 12:30 p.m., Saturday, May 10, at the Lawrence Public Library, 51 Lawrence St.

Some of the winners will be on hand to read their work, but any poets can come and share their verse.

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Photos


Katy Abraham of Methuen with four of her six grandsons, from left, Brady Abraham, 13, Tim Walsh, 11, Ryan Abraham, 16, and Zach Walsh, 13. Missing from the photo are: Geoffrey Abraham, 2, and his brother, J.C., 1. They live in Florida. Katy Abraham is the first-place winner in The Eagle-Tribune poetry contest. Her poem, "The Gift," is about playing and hanging out with her grandsons. Staff photo


Matthew Kraunelis and his son Jack, 8. Kraunelis is the second-place winner of The Eagle-Tribune poetry contest. Staff photo


Tim Cremin of Andover wrote about the relationship between a father and a son who has wrecked his car. Staff photo


Bill Gleed, manager of Frost Farm in Derry, N.H. He lives in Danville and is a winner of The Eagle-Tribune poetry contest. Staff photo


Alysia Alberti of Lawrence is the honorable mention winner of The Eagle-Tribune poetry contest. Staff photo